Crossing The Kyle

Francois Hagnere on Feb 9, 2011

Tags: Crossing, Kyle, love, scotland

You are not alone even when love has gone. Someone will pop up for you.

Kyle of Lochalsk, Scotland.

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When I first saw you

Your chin cupped in your hands,

Your eyes turned to land’s end,

I knew I should tell you

That you are not alone

Even when love has gone.

Another day, another guy

Both we look towards the sky,

Why should we be so shy?

I am here for you

As you are here for me,

Give me just a smile

And we can cross the kyle.

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Brewed Coffee on Feb 9, 2011
What a beautiful place. Would be nice to just sit and ponder about life and think of good friends. Would even be better to spend time there with a good friend
gaby7 on Feb 9, 2011
Very well written love poem!
MaxBuceo on Feb 9, 2011
Nice. I like this post
MJ Sunderland on Feb 9, 2011
Beautiful work, Francois. Very emotional and evocative of Scotland. ‘Your eyes turned to land’s end’ is an excellent line.
paperboy1960 on Feb 9, 2011
nice post and a lovely place as I have been there a few times
addjust on Feb 9, 2011
amazing
SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 9, 2011
That first smile means a lot
UncleSammy on Feb 9, 2011
Nice Share
JoeLopy on Feb 9, 2011
Nice poem. I like it.
pguims on Feb 9, 2011
great post
Starpisces on Feb 9, 2011
Your poem is so fine
With words that rhyme
Poets won’t feel shy
They speak their mind
Nice picture of kyle
Posted by a nice guy
Read by someone nice
Write somemore next time
Okay, I’m off, bye bye
AlmaG on Feb 9, 2011
This poem is so beautiful and so heartfelt my brother. I love it and I missed you ^_^
lillyrose on Feb 9, 2011
Awwww that was so beautiful, I am not used to you writing poetry but I am loving it.

I have been to quite a few Lochs in Scotland but I missed the one in the photo, it\’s really gorgeous.
Marco22331 on Feb 9, 2011
very nice post
tonywriter on Feb 9, 2011
you are a very romantic person mate. awesome and very touching write. Keep on writing like this.god bless you!
Lee Ness on Feb 9, 2011
Very ncie picture. very good and romantic.
Enjoyed this very much
Thanks Lee ness
Rana Sinha on Feb 9, 2011
Hope, hope, you bring hope.
albert1jemi on Feb 9, 2011
Thanks for sharing
trruk1 on Feb 9, 2011
Good job.
Goodselfme on Feb 9, 2011
This poem depicts the caring for another inspite of pain in the heart that exists. When we help others our pain gets less too. WEll said with carefully selected words to bring out the purpose of life.
Likha on Feb 9, 2011
We are getting to know more of the lovable, sentimental Francois with your brilliant poems brother. Glad to see you holding on and looking up. Again I say “Charge!” We are fighters, aren’t we?
DaYong on Feb 9, 2011
Beautiful job!!!!!
DaYong on Feb 9, 2011
Beautiful job!
BC Doan on Feb 10, 2011
You are such a caring guy, Francois! I can tell in this poem..
samgoldencoffee on Feb 10, 2011
i guess you’re in valentine mood…
its well written.
Francois Hagnere on Feb 11, 2011
Your lovely comments are really appreciated. Thank you.
pippe vonkuhne on Feb 18, 2011
In a spiritual way I am giving you a smile, Francois. Thank you for being there with this poem.
neopisiva on May 26, 2011
Great work,I love the rhymes,it`s all very flowing…

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