Let’s go to the other side of existence: The responsible living, with fun and a serious commitment, to do, to save, and be saved.

One way or another,
Everybody needs a point,
A crossover stage in life,
Where a transition has got to be made,
To raise up the level of awareness
Of every human that
We need not to remain
Under the spell of ignorance,
And that our action,
Or reaction may not be relevant
To what’s happening today,
In all aspects of life,
Oh, that all might see,
The importance of a crossover move,
Now, it is the right timing,
Ripe for immediate action,
The most excellent opportune move
To do what’s best to be done,
In ourselves, family, nation and planet,
These critical few moments in history,
Before it will be too late,
Let’s get it done in ourselves,
Family, community, and nations,
The much needed crossover,
Let’s do it now, if not again and again,
Clean up our lives and our environment!

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  • cardy on Oct 13, 2009

    Like you’re thoughts a good write nice read

  • Debra. on Oct 13, 2009

    Wise and important message! I’m with you on this one!

  • Francois Hagnere on Oct 13, 2009

    Very well-written as always. Thank you my friend.

  • Sourav on Oct 13, 2009

    Beauty! A fantastic poem! Well done!

  • ceegirl on Oct 13, 2009

    love read it

  • diamondpoet on Oct 13, 2009

    Thanks for that message hopefully ever will pass it on.

  • Aleena on Oct 13, 2009

    Nice work! Good message too its about time we changed

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 13, 2009

    A great piece with a message we all need to take notice of. Well done.

    Christine

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 13, 2009

    Beautifully said as always.

  • willie wondka on Oct 13, 2009

    well said, life would be good if everybody thought the same as you, great poem,liked it a lot.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 13, 2009

    I loved it! I think this is a great message too.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 13, 2009

    A very wise poem, thanks for the message!!

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 13, 2009

    A very wonderful poem,thought provoking with a great message!

  • monica55 on Oct 13, 2009

    Nicely done. A lovely message and wonderful thoughts.
    Monica.

  • strovek on Oct 13, 2009

    I like the poem. Very well written.

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 13, 2009

    That was a very imaginative way of expressing this.

  • Judy Sheldon on Oct 13, 2009

    Amen!

  • papaleng on Oct 14, 2009

    Like it. Thoughts well said.

  • Mythili Kannan on Oct 14, 2009

    Beautiful thought

  • cebuanaeyez on Oct 14, 2009

    What an insightful message!

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