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Cruel and Hurtful Words

Darla Cooke on Sep 10, 2009
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Just a poem.

 

You keep bad mouthing my family,

saying cruel and hurtful words.

I tell you how it makes me feel,,

but still you refuse to even stop.

Can’t you see what this is doing?

How you are destroying our marriage?

It has become very obvious to me,

that my feelings don’t matter at all.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 10, 2009

    tell him to wake up

    go for counselling

    or send me his date,
    day and time of birth

    for my free unconditional conditioning

    he needs help

    that i can see

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Sep 10, 2009

    Sad that you have to write this at all.

  • Emma Green on Sep 10, 2009

    Aww a very sad piece.

  • ken bultman on Sep 10, 2009

    If you don’t want a fight, brush it off, otherwise, say something snotty about his family.

  • alc on Sep 10, 2009

    There is a lot of power behind this piece thanks for the share!

  • CA Johnson on Sep 10, 2009

    This was a very sad but beautiful poem. Verbal abuse can be just as cruel as physical abuse.

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 10, 2009

    Great subject,one that is creative and not a lot write about!Wonderful work Darla!Verbal abuse can be as bad as physical because it is dealing with both emotional and mental abuse.

  • STEVE666 on Sep 10, 2009

    You say ‘just a poem’, and so on that basis—dramatic stuff, Darla.

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 11, 2009

    very sad… Just like steve 666, I hope it is “just a poem”

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