Thoughts on watching the Princess Dawn cruise ship from my hotel window, Auckland, New Zealand.

From my hotel room window on the third floor,

her presence dominated the view,

a huge white image demanding attention.

There all day, sitting, waiting,

while her passenger cargo spilled out

into the city shops and

onto the harbour’s waters.

At the end of the day

a horn sounded looming departure

and little by little she disappeared from view

behind the terminal building,

to appear again, slowly moving

toward the harbour entrance,

taking with her the memories and hopes

of holiday makers on board.

Across the road where she’d stood,

was a gap, an empty space,

like a piece cut from the view,

as if she had never been,

her presence already erased

from existence.

Time never stands still,

but journeys onward

just like the Princess Dawn.

Author photo of the Princess Dawn departing, through a dirty window on a rainy summers evening.

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  • ken bultman on Jan 21, 2010

    I liked the imagery of your poem, including the absence of it with the ship’s departure and the unwashed glass. lol.

  • diamondpoet on Jan 21, 2010

    I enjoyed this piece and thougt it was well written, I love being a passenger aboard a cruise ship and hopefully I will depart on one again. thanks for sharing.

  • standingproud on Jan 21, 2010

    Oh how id love to go on a cruise.
    The Princess Dawn looks mighty fine.

    A good write of your thoughts Val on this day of yours.
    Pleased to see the photo came out clear via the dirty window ,lol.

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 21, 2010

    I have not been on a cruise ship. A superb write.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Jan 21, 2010

    Yeah, I agree. We are on board the Cruise of Life.

  • VTech on Jan 22, 2010

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  • albert1jemi on Jan 22, 2010

    well written

  • PR Mace on Jan 22, 2010

    I’ve never been on a cruise, I tend to get sea sick. I loved your verses.

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 22, 2010

    An enjoyable piece, Val. I have been on a cruise ship and hope to go cruising in the future

  • AlmaG on Jan 23, 2010

    Wow! this makes me want to dream of going on board that ship. I enjoyed this post thanks :)

  • lovelights on Feb 26, 2010

    Lovely poem. I could actually picture myself looking out your hotel window as you described it.

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