Very true!

Nice work nice write!

How true!

You’ve made this very clear. A different side of DB. Very nice.

Very vivid. Nice, kabs.

Well that was short and very, very sweet! must be why I stay dirty, so no one can see my soul! x

Beautiful said!

Clever.. great work!

A great piece to match the lovely picture.

Christine

How wonderful. I am happy to have found someone else publishing haiku! I enjoyed your poem immensely.

Im not trying to be clean here. I work as a warehouse cleaner and get myself dirty everyday on the job. But coming home I get the break to be a writer so I try to come up with clean ideas as possible. Like seeing your dentures soaked in the glass when the vessel is clean. Thanks for all the comments, haiku is the answer to publication block (with triond) I realize.

excellent

best regards

yeah..! i wanna try that someday..haha. was that 10 12 7 syllables? anyway, lovely haiku deep blue..love it^__^

Oh, good work, kabayan

Rizz, that’s 22 words only including one separated by apostrophe. Well you know I have another article which had been frozen inside Triond’s freezer since last night and I’m wondering when it would be published. Haiku is both a relief from embarrassment and writer’s discomfort. You know it’s worst than motion sickness.

A great one to share…

I think what Rizzeis comment is that Haikus normally follow a pattern of 5 syllabls in the first line, 7 in the next, and 5 in the last.
I liked it anyhow. short and sweet, like lily said.

Nice haiku. I have a picture with the same name in picable.

Thanks Brenda. I’m really new at haiku. I’m reminded whenever Japanese people bow their heads and say “haik”. I will study the art and come up with serious ones according to pattern next time.

Very nice and well expressed!

Cleanliness is next to Godliness. The form of the haiku is classical. It is truly an art form. It is my favorite genre of poetry.

This is the first haiku I have seen from you Will and as with all of your work I loved it, it was beautiful. I liked the comparison made,so very true my friend!
All the best on your writing
Tan

That’s very good.

Very nice hailu, keep it up!

Should be “haiku” not “hailu” and sorry for a typing error.

very nice.

Great work Will and so very true! I admire your haiku very much. I really think you are very talented in this genre too.
Keep up the good work my friend!
And stay blessed always,
François

well said. I wasn\’t so sure if the pattern is right. Seems like there are more words than I usually read but I like it.

Clear and precise! Beautiful.

Good stuff…

The perfect picture for a beautiful haiku…