It deals with the sufferings a woman undergoes after being cheated by her lover. But ends with an optimistic note as she decides to succeed in her life and also teach him a lesson even if she had to go to the extent of taking revenge from him.

How cruel was that loneliness
asked for such a bitter happiness.
Thought was to step in the heaven
got something beyond the demon.
So pure his face, beautiful features
persuasion was there of the preachers.
Net of the cunningness invisible before
when thrown open created the tremor.
Here I lay broken in the barren field
and he praying to make others barren.
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  • vipin on May 29, 2008

    hey gr8 gud one ..keep it up…i am expecting more poetry frm u ….

  • rajeev ibhargava on Apr 9, 2009

    beautifully depicted poem. i’m really glad that you got your own back. EXCELLENT!

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