Lady, roses, cabbages, swans, gold cup, luring.

Enter upon a dream

weightless swans

so soft…

Sense of touch

can barely detect it.

Airy, smells like

spring wind.

Spattered pale…

Buttery, cabbage roses

sprayed to catch

the eye and hand.

Once you introduce yourself;

you’ll never let it go.

Not after I give you

the cup of gold.

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  • ceegirl on Nov 30, 2009

    nice poem

  • Parish Loveless on Dec 1, 2009

    A smooth an’ charming piece

    You are graceful in your writing …
    enchanting poetry / I can hear the music playing now

    Alluring,
    inviting
    and invigorating

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Dec 1, 2009

    Very nice poem. I love the way you express yourself.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 1, 2009

    Well writting, I loved the pic.

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