The following poem is from a collection of 41 written by me to try describing Huntington’s Disease (HD). This poem describes one of the most horrific aspects of HD.

Every person born to someone carrying the faulty gene has a 50% chance of inheriting HD. Because HD cannot skip generations, if your child becomes symptomatic (Juvenile HD) it can only have got it directly from the parent. It’s just a case of them having a higher “CAG” count and developing it sooner but it confirms the parent must have the faulty gene themself to have been able to have given it to the child. It therefore confirms their fate too.

The Generations

 

He stands above his restless child,

Her body thrashing out.

She’s tired and thin, just bone and skin,

He hears her scream and shout.

 

His heart is breaking every time,

He goes into her room.

What should have been a happy time,

Has been replaced with gloom.

 

Just how much time do they still have?

Too little time he’s sure.

He knows her fate because of this,

He’s seen it once before.

 

The gene is passing down the line,

He now has come to learn.

He watched his dad die, now his child,

And next will be his turn.


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  • oldster on Oct 25, 2009

    Very good poem, also very sad.
    If it’s you or yours my sympathy.

  • T Dainton on Oct 25, 2009

    Thanks Oldster

    My Hubby had HD and he watched his dad die of it but, knowing any child of ours might have inherited the disease, we chose not to have children.

    My poems are based on the many stories of other families living with HD though and it is a very sad place to be.

  • T Dainton on Oct 25, 2009

    Freudian typo there.

    That should read ‘has’ HD not ‘had’. There’s no cure I’m afraid.

  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Oct 26, 2009

    Great poem T.

    There is too much pain in this life sometimes.

  • T Dainton on Oct 26, 2009

    Thanks N.

    You are not wrong about there being too much pain that’s for sure!

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