This is a real experience of mine.

As i walked with my friends down the corridor,

I watched her,

Watching me watching her,

The corridor was crowded but everyone else was a blur,

For me, she and I were the only two persons there were,

I kept on staring till my emotions began to stir,

And although we walked in opposite directions, I wanted to follow her,

I did not know her name I just knew she was looking fine,

And to get to know her, I would join the longest line,

I would willingly walk a mile, or maybe two or even nine,

So I smiled at her and was glad to see her return a smile bigger than mine,

Then ,as we walked pass each other, I said hi and she greeted me in kind,

Since that day she has ever been on my mind.

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  • LadyElena on Nov 18, 2010

    Lovely Poem – I’m glad she responded positively. :)

  • Joseph Parks on Nov 18, 2010

    Thank you! Im glad too :)

  • tani90 on Nov 20, 2010

    nice

  • duck01 on Jan 22, 2012

    Very romantic.

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