This is a poem about the cycle of life, told in the most imaginative way as possible.

I kicked a pebble out of the sidewalk.

Watched it roll down, take a plunge and disturb the flow

Of the violet waters waiting for their chance

To graduate into the Atlantic, slow down; die with a promise to rise.

 

The pebble made a ripple and sent the lost leaf,

To rest by the banks, the dead deserved to be buried.

The buried nourishes all that’s near and far, there will soon grow a tree,

To revive this leaf and give it a place on its branch above.

 

The ropes on the bridge, the strings, lulls the night,

Every time the bitter-wind comes to inspect those asleep, without a hint.

Yet the fireflies preached of an hour when the world will come alive,

The flowers will bloom, the birds will sing, and all tears will be erased.

*             *             *             *

The sky was changing colors, defeated were the forces of the dark.

The clouds cleared to crack the dawn, and the first ray was born.

They stood noble, respect for the wounded, for a diplomatic stance,

Behind the darkest of your days, is a sun always shining, a battle you’ll win.

 

The dawn woke the Earth, a teenage girl who is a mother who safe keeps-

The infants, the complexities of life–us. Her only greed,

To hide from us, the secrets, till its time. But search and you will see.

It’s all within us, inside our heart-you don’t have to win a war to rule, but, Ah! Soon you will know.

You don’t need lies, but just a try to prove your worth, your might.

The ground was covered in dew, and a seed did sprout, thou slightly bend.

The birds sang, flowers bloomed, and like the bees we hastily filled our hives.

For the crown did fall, conspiracy drew the blood, and the day collapsed.

                *             *             *             *

 

Routinely, here I’m on the bridge, the requisite, to kick another pebble away,

And turn the wheels again, to win, to lose, its all a cycle of life.

 

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  • Lostash on Aug 13, 2009

    Oh yes! I like this very much!

  • daring104 on Aug 13, 2009

    Very nice. Keep posting! :)

  • miraj on Sep 6, 2009

    quite a promising concept I must say Ronne,I like how you captured the intricacies of nature and gave life in the most insentient of beings(rocks and leaf),its great you know there are all in the cycle of life.great job.the world needs more people like you.

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 8, 2009

    The wings of a butterfly. Thoughtful piece.

  • David Crerand on Sep 8, 2009

    well done! very creative

  • raptor22 on Sep 8, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • B.S. Kitty on Sep 8, 2009

    :)

  • BradONeill on Sep 9, 2009

    Very interesting Ronnie. I enjoyed the imagery and the almost Godlike appearance of yourself at the end. I liked the inference that you kicking the pebble somehow starts the full cycle.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 9, 2009

    wow that is a powerful poem. I will think of it the next time I kick a pebble into the water.

  • oldster on Sep 9, 2009

    Good poem Ronne–Very good use of metaphors for life.

  • STEVE666 on Sep 10, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 11, 2009

    I like your word play, especially, “conspiracy drew the blood.”

  • Stephen J. Ardent on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice representation of history.

  • lillyrose on Dec 16, 2009

    fantastic way to describe what happens to us all in the end!

  • maranatha on Dec 17, 2009

    A thoughtful rendition, and inherently affirms that each of us has his part to play.

  • Nicholas Peterson on Dec 18, 2009

    Good? Very much so. The most imaginative way possible? Not necessarily. Read TS Elliot’s “The Wasteland”…that’ll get your mind goin.

  • A.L.Smith on Dec 18, 2009

    Behind the darkest of your days, is a sun always shining, a battle you’ll win…..Great line, I will never kick a stone again and not think about this.

  • Theresa Johnson on Dec 21, 2009

    Wonderful poem. A very vivid picture was painted amongst your words.

  • hfj on Dec 21, 2009

    Well done. You’re doing your part to recycle. Good thought out piece.

  • Cebah on Dec 22, 2009

    Beautiful poem with great imagery. Each action causes a reaction and so on.

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