Cycle of Love

nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 28, 2008

Tags: cycle, forever, goodbye, heaven, love, relationship, shooting, star, Thoughts, together

Love, now I see you, now I don’t.

Up there from nowhere
Like a shooting star
Heaven has sent you to me
Just like the others

Keeping you, treasuring you
Cherishing you, loving you
Just like the others

Holding on so tight
Praying Intently
We’ll stay together
And hoping fervently
You’ll stay forever

Up, up from here
Like a shooting star
You’re no longer in my hand
Just like the others

Up, up there in heaven
Like a shooting star
You’re no longer in sight
Like all the others

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mae on Aug 28, 2008
So beautifully written.
Unofre Pili on Aug 28, 2008
sentimental and perfect imagery.
claris on Aug 28, 2008
nicely done poem, romantic one.
Alexa Gates on Aug 28, 2008
very beautiful!
The Quail on Aug 28, 2008
Awesome poem well done.
Lauren on Aug 28, 2008
Another romantic one Norbert. It’s truly lovely
Loreta Dorington on Aug 28, 2008
Yes, lovely poem but very sad, too, if I may say.
tonisan60 on Aug 28, 2008
very romantic and beautiful, my applauses
Juancav on Aug 28, 2008
Nostalgic and beautiful poem.
PR Mace on Aug 28, 2008
Romantic and very touching. Good job. Nice to see another side of you.
valli on Aug 28, 2008
Beautiful poem.
william rodriguez II on Aug 29, 2008
Bravo!
Cynthia on Aug 29, 2008
Nobert, this is such a beautifully penned piece of poetry. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. *S* Cynthia
desmonrock21 on Aug 29, 2008
double thumbs up! very lovely poem sir..
Eden Emersen on Aug 29, 2008
They must be beautiful souls for God to want them so. I like the vulnerability in the poem.
acecampillo on Aug 29, 2008
I like the way this poem is written.
There is so much passion in it. Keep up the good work.
God Bless!
tracy sardelli on Aug 30, 2008
Lovely poem, thank you.
Glynis Smy on Aug 31, 2008
Simple, elegant and beautiful work
R.B. Parsley on Aug 31, 2008
Nobert,
What a surprise!So well written buddy. The emotion comes through quite clearly!!! Write some more of these buddy. You are quite a poet!!!! Excellent job. Keep up the good work!!!

Randy
Judy Sheldon on Sep 1, 2008
Beautiful and exquisitely sad.

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