About my beloved father.

DAD ALWAYS IN MY DREAMS

© Nov, 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

The smallest injuries of mine

Left floods in your eyes,

Is it now my turn?

I am paying the price.

I remember those endearing days

When I slept on your warm chest,

Now I live in those rhythms

That your sweet heart has left.

Always in my day dreams

I sleep on your safe laps,

I am fed up with my saline tears

Can someone close my eye taps?

© Nov, 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    Beautiful work my friend, I love reading you stuff.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 20, 2009

    Lovely work. Fathers are so hard to forget.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 20, 2009

    Very touching!

  • ken bultman on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice tribute.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 20, 2009

    The loss of a parent is such a difficult thing to get over. We never really do.

  • Teves on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice info…
    http://www.articlespost.page.tl

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 20, 2009

    Fathers should never be forgotten, they are with you always.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 20, 2009

    very passionate

  • wonder on Nov 21, 2009

    1. mind–museum, a great mind has composed this.

    2. Live in those rythyms—beautiful! You’ve spoken for many.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 21, 2009

    Hi wonder, thank you for reading in between the lines.

  • India on Nov 21, 2009

    Beautiful poem.

  • Hansika on Nov 21, 2009

    very nice poem…

  • bearhugs on Nov 21, 2009

    I really like this poem. It’s beautiful.

  • AlmaG on Nov 21, 2009

    Really touching… beautiful!

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 21, 2009

    This is a wonderful tribute. Thank you for sharing

  • papaleng on Nov 21, 2009

    I share the same feeling with yours. Its been 12 years since my Dad passed away, but I always think of him.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 21, 2009

    very nice

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 21, 2009

    A touching and well written poem.

  • Billyfnstacy on Nov 21, 2009

    I miss my dad, hes alive but, I am halfway across the world right now.

  • VTech on Nov 22, 2009

    thanks for this

  • deep blue on Nov 22, 2009

    Beautifully written poetry.

  • Pete Macinta on Nov 23, 2009

    Another touching one. Had to read it since I miss my dad.

  • ivantantan on Nov 25, 2009

    Cute=D

  • Starpisces on Dec 4, 2009

    this poem has touched my heart

  • JulyBabi1992 on Apr 13, 2010

    touching

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