The human spirit is fragile, some people connot handle harsh criticism, the moral to the story is choose your words wisely, not all people think like you.

The human spirit is very fragile

The saying goes, “You’re such a strong woman”

Not so, you’re on the outside looking in

Mask the real person who hides from the

Reality of criticism,

Offend people with the truth you speak

Maybe, they don’t want to hear so they cry

Talk about you behind your back

As if the rumor will not support the truth

To haunt you, because of what was said

Yet you may not defend

Damage control cannot be done

Friendship lost because your wisdom

Is much too exceptional for the human spirit

Maybe to precocious for you.

by Cynthia Aholelei (C) May 5, 2011

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  • Guy Hogan on May 5, 2011

    I get hurt all the time. I just have to go on. Either go on or kill myself and I do not want to kill myself. So I go on.

  • real lady on May 6, 2011

    As the saying goes, “if you don’t have anything good to say, don’t say anything.” :)

    Seriously, I totally agree with you on this. We must be careful to what we are about to say. It takes one good word to uplift a person and don’t know how many words to undo the damage.

  • Melody SJAL on May 7, 2011

    Persistence, patience and faith are very important. Nice piece.

  • MissAthena on May 8, 2011

    Love it!

  • Ambi2010 on May 9, 2011

    Nice post.

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  • Sara Holt on May 16, 2011

    This is so expressive on the sensitive nature of human relationships and how fragile they really are. Your work Rocks!

  • neopisiva on Jun 8, 2011

    Very wise words!Good poem.

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