Some words drop in the heart like boulders..

Damn!!
They spit on my name!!
Thinking me to be lame!!
Am I such a dame??

Such offensive words!!
Splattering dirt!!
Filching my mirth!!
Showing me hell on earth!!

Is that why I born??
To see my image torn?
A time so forlorn!!
Heart prickling by thorns!!

But I be steady!!
Always ready!!
To show how sturdy,
I am worthy!!

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Comments (12)
  • wonder on Jan 19, 2010

    A strong message.

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 19, 2010

    the ‘Virginia Woolf effect’

  • joyhyena29 on Jan 19, 2010

    nice post^^

  • standingproud on Jan 19, 2010

    grrrr
    you go girl
    grrrr.
    Tell them how it is
    yeah

  • vibhor200 on Jan 19, 2010

    absolutly love the attitude. Go ahead

  • metro7 on Jan 19, 2010

    Thats the spirit never give up.its their problem not yours.positive attitude works wonders.tc.

  • AlmaG on Jan 19, 2010

    Yes! you are worth it!… powerful poem :)

  • albert1jemi on Jan 19, 2010

    great write

  • upeshdaa on Jan 19, 2010

    Well written.

  • Sourav on Jan 19, 2010

    So… there is positivity in the negativity. Now you are inspired. You got my point?

  • cutedrishti8 on Jan 20, 2010

    Very well written..

  • devsir on Jan 20, 2010

    Excellent use of words in the form of a poetry

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