All true Nice one friend

I wouldn’t give up on people just yet.

Well written,

Inna

Wonderful!! well presented..nice words too..I liked this ‘Greed, our true claim to fam’..so true..lol..Thanks for sharing. cheers

Very well written piece, very well expressed!

I agree things get kinda rough at times, but I can’t make myself the sky is falling. The Bible says the world will never end. I think it’s just changing, like it always has.

Great piece..

An incredibly dark & foreboding piece, Debra – but so reminds me of Jesus’ words:”Now when these things begin to take place, straighten up and raise your heads, because your redemption is drawing near”.

dark and critical, but much needed, in our world that has badly gone astray

An incredibly beautiful poem Debra:) Mother Earth – I’m not a tree hugging hippy but I think most people are developing a global conscience. Australia is one of a few countries in the developed world to have rainforests – this reminded me of that:)

A compelling and passionate train of thoughts to describe our present ordeals in the modern world. Definitely a masterpiece, Debra.

An expressive piece of thoughts and concerns Deb ..of how human beings should and shouldn’t function in the world and visions of how the world should ideally be. Both religious and philosophic.. sinister forces are always waiting to strike..everything that happens to the protagonist in this grim universe is full of incredible irony..this profound piece of poetry however, brings solace in the present..exquisite Debra

Powerful words, ones to heed Debra, good work.

I loved the way how the poem shifted from pessimism to optimism.
one that carried an element of hope amidst all this ungodly gloom.
a profound write Debra.

Time never remains static but it keeps on changing.

Very true… and very appropriate in these times.

Ah…But this is the truth…..Which one of knows when our soul He will require?.
Take heed….search for The Lost Lamb and plant thy seed. Absolutely wonderful post .Thank you for sharing.

This is such a powerful piece, Debra. One we should all take notice of and try to do something about. It really brings home the damage we are doing to our world. Well done.

Christine

You are describing the world as a mirror,lift up our voices to stop Armageddon and Lord Jesus comes to his kingdom.Well done Debra.

Beautiful poem. But God made us what we are and knows what we can be. I cannot believe he made us only for the purpose of
punishment. I’m optimistic we will use our best wisdom that is planted in our heads and that we will come out of this and make a better world without having to die a thousand times to get there

Well done, people in every age have thought the same thoughts. There is nothing new under the sun.

Great reminder

nice one! thank you..wish you happy new year..cheers

And yet There Is Hope! Wonderfully written.

Brilliantly written apocalyptic poem on how fragile we really are.

Dark but yet very hopeful. Wonderful piece Debbie.

Very well written. I’m pleased that you appear to hold out some hope at the end. I haven’t given up on humanity either.

Great piece, enjoyed it.

Some powerful words, well done!

a timely and brilliantly written reminder that humans are only borrowing the planet and we need to take better care of it and each other

brilliant post.. i like it.. very well said.. thanks!

I hope your words will echo far and wide.

Great Post….

Nice write Debra. We should all be concerned because the writings in the book of Revelations confirms these statements you made in this piece. The book of Revelation is a road map to the end of the world that is rapidly approaching. Well done friend.

On these days we are really paying our dues to mother nature!
A wonderful construction! Cheers!