Poem about the dance of love….Its a dance about living.It never takes or withholds,it always wants to please,and ask nothing of itself,it only knows three words,give,give,and give…..

The old man took a bow,

as mother and daughter applauded,

all they could say was wow,

they were both enthralled…,

They were so excited and happy,

it almost made them cry,

couldnt stop cheering and clapping,

now they knew why…,

Why people would gather,

in all kinds of weather,

just to see him dance,

was a once in a lifetime chance…,

Then the little girls mother spoke,

my girl and I would like to know,

and ask a favor and really hope,

that with us you would come…,

My mother lies a dying,

and she had no idea,

after all these years,

of a love she was denying…,

She always loved singing,

and she could dance too,

she didnt know of your feelings,

we didnt even know of you…,

Then the little girl asked,

still with tears in her eyes,

could you do your love dance for her,

before she dies……………….to be continued……….

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  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 14, 2011

    You have nearly got me in tears now. I hope it is a happy ending.

  • Stan Wilson on Oct 16, 2011

    hahahaha yes well as you know happiness and blessings can come in many forms….hummm well I think it can…hahaha….please I could be wrong…

    Glad your still here with me…will try and finish the poem/story today…have been away the last few days…sorry to hold you in any suspense….

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