Ever wonder where dreams come from and why?

Dancing Dreamers
18 Feb 09

Out camping with his buddies
They told tall tales under the full moon
It was late after midnight
That they finally fell asleep under that moon

He dreamed of a naked lady
Dancing under that full moon
He tossed and turned till he woke up
Finding himself staring right into that moon

He sat bolt upright
He could still hear that same music
His buddies still very fast asleep
He left them to follow the music

The red haired young woman
Danced naked to a flute played melody
He hid behind the rocks
As he lustily admired her body

She was like something magical
Turning, twirling, tumbling and dancing
He felt himself so drawn to her
That soon he also was naked and dancing

She showed no surprise
When he joined with her
They moved together so easily
He felt he was becoming one with her

As they danced under the moonlight
She spoke to him like singing a song
I danced for the moon
Calling out for a dreamer with my song

Only a dreamer could follow the music
You may think I have captured you
But that can never be so
Dreams will guide us and make us true

Day after day they danced with each other
Their freedom enslaved their souls
Life had its toils, troubles and disappointments
Yet their children praise the deepness of their souls

More of my work:

Dance in the Woods
Primitive Thunder
Good Morning My Goddess

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  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 20, 2009

    Pity it was only a dream eh Milton! Very imaginative. Well done.

    Christine

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 20, 2009

    it’s a good poem… really!

  • Darla Smith on Feb 20, 2009

    Great poem! I really enjoyed this one.

  • lisa on Feb 20, 2009

    Dreams should be more like reality.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 20, 2009

    Interesting dream and interesting poem!

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 20, 2009

    Such a whimsical poem! ^_^

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 22, 2009

    Wonderful work!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Palestrya on Apr 20, 2011

    Hmm only a dream??? That’s where all things have their start. . .
    I think that it is a very beautiful poem!

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