Dancing on The Clouds

erwinkennythomas on Dec 7, 2011

Euphoria envelops me as I was dancing way up on the clouds until I was unexpectedly brought back to earth by a jolt of reality.

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Dancing on the clouds

That are white

And fluffy

- – -

Goofy as it may seem

The blue sky

Was above me

- – -

As more varieties of blues appeared

Dark clouds swept in

And here I was

Not knowing

What to do

- – -

Suddenly there was

A rush of cold wind

Followed by a downpour

That hurled me back

To earth

- – -

Again I was

In my favorite place

Where dreams

Are made

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Which sedated

My very soul

With a lover

- – -

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mphsglo on Dec 7, 2011
Very nice.
CHIPMUNK on Dec 7, 2011
Amazing!! Such great talent
ChuzNul on Dec 7, 2011
nice picture
pattiann on Dec 7, 2011
BRAVO! I wish you would share 100s a day as I can never tire of reading your poetry.
Saurav Banerjee on Dec 7, 2011
Great share!
Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 7, 2011
cool
sheilanewton on Dec 7, 2011
“Goofy as it may seem” … and then the goofy image!!! You’re a wag Erwin! I loved the poetry here. You excel in this piece.
ittech on Dec 7, 2011
As more varieties of blueness appeared

Dark strikes sweptback in

And Hera I was

Not knowing

What to do
SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 7, 2011
Good illustrations
wonder on Dec 8, 2011
A great wielding of the mind to recede from the abstract to the concrete.
Martin Kloess on Dec 8, 2011
exactly.
Martin Kloess on Dec 8, 2011
Exactly TY.
ittech on Dec 8, 2011
As more varieties of appeared

Dark affects sweptback in

And Here I was

Not knowing

What to do
FX777222999 on Dec 8, 2011
Nice poem.

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