A Finale to die for.

In this dark I lose my way, I stand this ground and wait.
I quickly find my demons won twisting me into fate,
I raise and hold my gaze, but casting down he never stays,
A burning hate will pierce my soul, Im driven deeper into my hole,
A price I pay too much to stand this burning coin within my hands.
A single blade to see awakens me, I wait in shadows my body shaken,
the trap is set but I am the bait, a single chance but maybe too late.
 A tested foe for hatreds gain, I see the blood but feel no pain.
Its finally clear that what I see, my hated foe, is and always was….me

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  • HatedNation on Nov 9, 2008

    Waiting for some feedback..

  • lady luck on Nov 9, 2008

    great!

  • Rose on Nov 9, 2008

    This is deep….I really like it and believe you have some great talent!

  • AirborneSaint on Nov 11, 2008

    It is very good, reminds me of the following quote, “Welcome Death, quoth the rat, as the trap fell.”

  • Aimee on Nov 15, 2008

    Very true, we are our own worst enemy, however not many acknowledge that they are the enemy.
    Well done. Very well done.

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