Darkness

Noreen Ann Jenkins on Oct 28, 2008

Tags: darkness, mystery, phantoms, prey, victim

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Fear grips me…

Darkness–
where the mystery
and the unknown lies
Fear grips me
like a leech clinging
to its prey.

Darkness–
where phantoms lurk
searching for
their next
unsuspecting victim.

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Comments (5)

richard on Oct 29, 2008
very good
Michael Degenhardt on Nov 20, 2008
The read is wonderfully vivid while the words describe darkness so well and smoothly. Very well composed. Michael
Lizzie Green on Jan 22, 2009
Spooky! I’m a little scared now! x
postpunkpixie on Mar 1, 2009
Oooh nice imagery here.
grace85 on Mar 1, 2009
oh i hate the dark to…. nice!

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