A poem about the fictional world of Volcania.

Great mountains loom,
Under skies clouded gray,
No warmth be consumed,
Without light of day.

Volcania’s Darkside,
May always shine,
With stars in its,
Southeastern corner so fine.

Because of the birth,
Of an angel so fair,
And her halo of flame,
High above golden hair.

She brings to this place,
A myriad of light,
And from darkness awakens,
A fire ever bright.

Without darkness the stars,
Cannot shine up above.
But they also depend,
On the light of her love.

So you see, without darkness,
What good is the light?
And without the light’s brilliance,
What good, is the darkness of night?

They walk hand in hand,
Like the shadows of dreams,
In this world of Delusions,
A world of grand schemes.

And upon one another,
They’ll always depend.
From flames to black ash,
May they both, never end.

         —Michele Cameron Drew

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  • Bobby key on Nov 17, 2008

    I like this poem and your images

  • DM PARKER on Nov 17, 2008

    Great images. I like the story too.

  • Reilley on Nov 17, 2008

    Very nice, dreamy yet powerful, I liked it.

  • lindalulu on Nov 17, 2008

    Wonderful images, great poem!

  • valli on Nov 17, 2008

    Nice poetry.

  • Debra. on Nov 17, 2008

    Wonderful, with such beautiful imagery! God bless you. I love this piece!

  • Peter Cimino on Nov 17, 2008

    Very lovely poem. I really like this.

  • JoWo on Nov 17, 2008

    I especially appreciated the effect of the rhythmic change in the last line of the 8th stanza.

  • JoWo on Nov 17, 2008

    Sorry, I meant 6th stanza.

  • Aardaerimus on Nov 20, 2008

    Another fantastic feast of imagrey for the mind, Michele. The rhythm was excellent as well.

  • Tony Downing on Nov 21, 2008

    Everything else has been said… I love the symmetry and the way you express this. Certainly darkness is the absence of light, just as hate is the absence of love, but of course there are many layers because we do not live in a black and white world. Very nice work M. ~T

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