Darkness (Reverse Tanka)

tankermone on Apr 17, 2012

Tags: clouds, darkness, gather, hades, light, lightning, poem, reverse, sky, snapshot, Tanka, touch

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Dark clouds envisioned.

DARKNESS

The clouds gather in the sky,

Split by lightning now,

Like a snapshot of Hades,

Showing the darkness,

Only light could touch.

PTR

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sha4nny on Apr 17, 2012
I like it!
lauralu on Apr 17, 2012
sounds like those recent tornadoes, good descriptions
Angelji on Apr 18, 2012
nature speaks..good one Tanker..
Steven West on Apr 19, 2012
Excellent poem. Great style and feeling.
cryptid on Apr 19, 2012
Love it!

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