A poem about spending time with your love on that bright sunny day.

Darling You

Wait a while

Let me see you smile

Stop and play

Look up at this wonderful day

Darling, you. Feel the season is true

Bright and blue

Sweet and nice

See all the splendor of life

Come on……..

Come and stay

Join me and come play

Darling, you…….

Can’t you see the love so true?

The sun is so high

The birds are all in flight

The love is so right

We’re lost in paradise

Such a perfect day

I want to stay-

With you

This is all I can do

Such a beautiful way-

Today!

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved.

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  • Teves on Dec 19, 2009

    Nice one…

  • fmakeita on Dec 19, 2009

    That’s so romantic.. Nice work!

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Dec 19, 2009

    Excellent! There’s nothing better than spending a beautiful day at the park or beach with the one u love.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 19, 2009

    with my youthful darling

    that was long long away

    have a darlingst day

    throught the day

    on the beacg do stay

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 19, 2009

    pl read BEACH

  • Goodselfme on Dec 19, 2009

    Very well penned prose with great sharing.TX

  • banana4LYFE on Dec 21, 2009

    Beautifully composed.. great imagery. I can picture my walk on the beach with someone in my arms, holding me closer thatn my dad when I was child.. GREAT PERFECT AND INSPIRING

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 22, 2009

    I TOO AM A DARLING LOVER

    WHO KNOWS

    PERHAPS SOME DAY

    OR NEVER

    A DARLING

    I SHALL BE
    IF EVER

  • Dame Barbara on Jan 1, 2010

    Another good write! I enjoyed it.

  • Roe2115 on Mar 3, 2011

    Beautiful and romantic!

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