The sight of her breast made me cry
I turned to my friend and asked why
For my head did race
To some other place
She just slapped your face came reply

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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 17, 2012

    How funny! You are so talented!

  • marqjonz on Aug 17, 2012

    Good limerick and savage cleavage.

  • Jswana on Aug 17, 2012

    ha, ha. I’m chuckling. Is that what he gets? And I agree with Patiann, you are talented. So cute! :)

  • Kai Vicky on Aug 17, 2012

    Funny Martin.. Well, from now on it would be better to fantasize ones breast in dreams or in private with her, NOT IN PUBLIC. :D

  • smokychristine on Aug 17, 2012

    Quite a funny ending. It gives a good laugh.

  • norlaw on Aug 17, 2012

    Well written as usual. And thank you for all your support as I appreciate it very much.

  • observer1 on Aug 18, 2012

    Great stuff again! Love that comment about savage cleavage

  • Donnah Clark on Aug 18, 2012

    haha, be warned, gentlemen!

  • JCEvangelista on Aug 20, 2012

    er… Good Tip :D

  • Kristie Claar on Aug 20, 2012

    Good one

  • Marquis de Joker on Aug 30, 2012

    But it was totally worth it… the slap

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