Dawn

Darla Cooke on May 25, 2009

Tags: dawn, fawn, rainbow

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A poem written by my daughter Krystle.

Image via Wikipedia

When I woke up to the morning bright dawn,

I saw a beautiful fawn outside my window.

The dawn gives us a bright morning sunrise,

with colors that sparkle like a beautiful rainbow.

I’ll never forget seeing my first bright beautiful dawn.

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rajeev bhargava on May 25, 2009
beautiful poem which brought peace to me as i read it.
theresacall on May 25, 2009
great piece
101 on May 25, 2009
this is such a peaceful feeling you have captured.your words are very peaceful and vivid to my mind.Always,Gary La Buda
marisolflamenco on May 25, 2009
Great piece, thanks for sharing
goodselfme on May 25, 2009
well done by your daughter!
TOPELECTRICIAN on May 25, 2009
HEY!LOOKS LIKE WE HAVE ANOTHER POET IN THE HOUSE!VERY GOOD JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
ajmera on May 25, 2009
Really a beautiful poem with very very attractive photo
rizzei on May 26, 2009
the greatness of the poem corresponds with that image above. very beautiful:)
swatilohani on May 26, 2009
great composition
STEVE666 on May 26, 2009
A chip off the old block, Darla.
kate smedley on May 26, 2009
another lovely poem by Krystle

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