Dawn Breaks in London Town

revivor on Aug 11, 2009

Tags: birds, dawn, Life, London, Moon, sunrise

Awake at dawn and reflecting on the promise of another day ahead.

Image by *L*u*z*a* via Flickr

The sun is slowly waking up
Inviting me to spend my day
In splendid silence
With warmth and light
To help me on my way

A bird with boldness sings to me
Exhorting me to spend my day
In interaction
With a sense of freedom
In all I do and say

The moon prepares to leave my sky
Reminding me to spend my day
With expectation
And the reassurance
That I’m here to stay

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Darla Smith on Aug 11, 2009
Lovely poem and pic.
papaleng on Aug 11, 2009
That was so inspiring, waking up each day, looking as the sun slowly rises and with it the hope that the day will be fruitful. like it friend.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 11, 2009
A beautiful poem and a beautiful picture. A very uplifting piece. Well done.
Casey Mack on Aug 12, 2009
A lovely day, and a wonderful picture painted in words. Excellent.
CutestPrincess on Aug 15, 2009
Short and simple yet meaningful at the same time.
giftarist on Aug 16, 2009
Wonderful thought!
Ruby Hawk on Aug 20, 2009
Beautiful, I always get up looking forward to a wonderful day. Most of the time I get exactly what I expect.
livemike on Aug 23, 2009
Nice poem…
JLEck on Aug 26, 2009
One thing in life that is free!
Joe Dorish on Sep 4, 2009
Now that is a great attitude!
ken bultman on Sep 7, 2009
Quite the positive morning attitude put to rhyme.
BullwinkleMuse on Sep 8, 2009
This poem has such a lilt and so soothing a message, I want to start each day reading it, just to ensure it’s a beautiful day.
Duff D Moss on Sep 8, 2009
Well I must say the promise of your day speaks kinder words than mine

Nice emotion. Good stuff.
David Crerand on Sep 8, 2009
A beautiful way to welcome a new day. Great poem.
Ronne on Sep 8, 2009
Inspiring!
well written rev,
btw awesom pic!
raptor22 on Sep 8, 2009
Great poem.
Annie Hintsala on Sep 8, 2009
That was quite nice, and the picture fit it well.
BradONeill on Sep 9, 2009
Just please be quite when you get up that early. I hate positive people before 9 am. Great poem my friend and a lovely thought put to rhyme.
miraj on Sep 9, 2009
A very soothing piece.
Dana820 on Sep 10, 2009
Hello. Lovely poem.
STEVE666 on Sep 10, 2009
A very well written positive verse. Enjoyed it.
Rod Ferrandino on Sep 11, 2009
I haven’t been to London since the Queen’s Silver Jubilee, but I took a sunrise stroll in Hyde Park that I will never forget; thanks for bringing that back to the surface.
spiritwalker on Sep 21, 2009
I love it. I dont know exactly which poet you remind me of but I did get that sense of deja vu.
Lee Ness on Oct 6, 2009
Very Nice Poem and London would be fun to visit
Lee Ness
AlmaG on Oct 31, 2009
Fantastic poem! I love it ^_^
Phill Senters on Nov 18, 2009
Really nice, and a great picture.

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