Tears washes pain inside, gives clearer view of what is ahead. It is just composed one percent water but 99 % feelings.

Day after day

Tears after tears

Why it’s like this 

Why it have to be like this 

Why do you love to see my cry

What is my fault 

What debt i got

That seems these tears are paying

What is in my tears 

That you love to see ,

As if

These tears 

Are your nourishment,

Are your satisfaction,

As if ,

You don’t like a day to  pass

Without seeing it ,

Does it really gives you happiness

To see me always in tears..

Don’t you want to see me smile

Composed and formed

Don’t you want to hear me giggling 

What is it that   you really wanted 

Me? always shattered ,

Crashed and wounded.

Do you like to find me

In that   tunnel ,

Or hibernate in my shell ,

Would you be happy 

If  I wear my old clothes,

And sing those old song ..

Are those tears dripped

still not  good enough  ?

day after day ……

tears after tears !

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  • girishpuri on Feb 1, 2012

    it’s good and very well expressed poem , you are successful in what you wanted to covey , good going.

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 1, 2012

    I can feel the emotion within every line. Well-done.

  • Vinaya says good bye on Feb 1, 2012

    Yes I want to see you smile, I want to hear giggle. Your laughing self is your true self.

  • jotomy on Feb 1, 2012

    very emotional one. nice

  • Dora77 on Feb 1, 2012

    Angel,
    The feelings are so evident with every word u have said.
    Plus,the picture portrays all….Good going!
    thanks.

  • Martin Kloess on Feb 1, 2012

    very good

  • erwinkennythomas on Feb 1, 2012

    much impact

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 1, 2012

    Honey, run as fast as you can from that situation.

  • Nidhi Rai on Feb 2, 2012

    Very nice work. The picture also speaks for itself.

  • Thewoodlandelf on Feb 3, 2012

    Can totally feel the emotion in your words.

  • iva75cpb on Feb 4, 2012

    The one who feels pleasure from “torturing” your soul is simply not for you. Although … “we kill what we love”, remember?

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