Fantasy poem about a narrator riding a sea horse up through the heavens in the day. Seeing the moon, then returning to earth, as the moon metomorphs back to gold.

First dawn, still – earth blue-gray haze

I walk on golden sand beside the sea,

barefoot; a breeze billows my skirt…

Mist rises, cools my brow – soothes my soul.

A horse of the sea calls me to hop astride,

we soar out atop the depths, then we rest,

joining a white crescent moon in its sleep

after a long night of reflection, golden

glow on sand and sea.

Lulled by a lunar lullaby,

we rest on the breast of the tides.

As dusk comes, we soar back to shore.

I return to my one-time world,

the moon returns to the heavens,

metamorphosing back to gold.

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  • swatilohani on Jun 26, 2009

    apt

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 28, 2009

    Love it! Great writing!

  • razumtina on Oct 27, 2009

    Keep up the good work!!!

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 25, 2010

    This is a beautiful poem filled with captivating images.

  • Joanna Maharis on Feb 25, 2010

    This is a beautiful poem, filled with captivating images.

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