One of my pieces of poetry. I wrote this with just a lonely feeling in my room, with people on my mind. The sun was setting and I was full of thoughts.

As the late sun sets,
and the early moon rises
life changes from emotion
to motionless
the feeling of rebellion
escaping loneliness
to not think about the passion
fills life with momentary bliss
the mind, crawling deeper into the abyss
unrealistic thoughts
brought to life through fantaision
so I sit
we wait
mark off dates
another cigg lit
one more day down
not another frown
I’ll wear me like a crown.

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  • giritharanj on Nov 29, 2010

    nice share – gj

  • Joey on Nov 30, 2010

    Thank you.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 30, 2010

    great share

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