A poem about daydreaming lovers who met once, parted, and still love each other.

I didn’t know what day it was this time

I looked around and saw the sun above

I didn’t know where I was, I didn’t see any sign

I felt the warmth and but said where is the love

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I didn’t know if I was awake or asleep

My mind seem to dance across the walls of time

Below was a lake and I wanted to take a leap

The message wasn’t clear, like words strung out in a rhyme

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I was lost in a dream feeling perplexed when I saw her and needed to find a way

I remember the endless nights, the joyful dizziness that came before this

I walked over, closed my eyes standing next to her and I said stay

Kissing under the strobe lights, all-encompassing musical sounds of the mist

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Her lips were wet and she smiled at me sweetly

My heart ran fast, was it wrong to dream aloud?

Her perfume a gift and she made love to me wickedly

Will the sandman finish his task, and spoil it making me see clouds

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I opened my eyes again and you were gone

Surrounded by nature I meditated on the answers to you

Transported back to my hilltop domain and chanting my farewell song

I heard clashing thunder, rain, and knew the solution was true

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In a token of faith I realized so clearly, that the answers lie within me

So don’t let the pain, uncertainties, get you down, (Spoken inside my head so majestically) 

Don’t let the shadow of doubt ruin love, can’t you see? You’ve got to maintain, keep a positive spin and faithful sound

The alarm clock went off next to me!

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I don’t know how? All done overnight like a Christmas carol without the freight. I woke up, a new day, people happy and free, O let it be!

I pushed my doors open and ran down the street out of sight.

I traveled far and light seeking a tender spectacle

She awoke too, thinking of me, and her heart sang long, wishing there was a way

She opened the door and beholds my eyes, a princess, beautiful miracle. And said, O please this time stay

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Locked in a cradle of love, we leave all bad dreams behind……

No more daydreaming to cloud our my mind

Talked so sweet words, so tender a moment making the time…….

Together we will make the world more sweet and kind

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved.

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Comments (7)
  • wonder on Nov 27, 2009

    A thread of romance beautifully strung into vividly described context, with a positive outcome.Refreshing!

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 28, 2009

    Lovely poem. Vivid imagery. well-done.

  • Mr Ghaz on Nov 28, 2009

    wonderful and lovely poem..very attractive indeed..i really liked it! thanks a lot..cheers 8) 8)

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 28, 2009

    Wonderful poem..Nice one to start in the morning…

  • papaleng on Nov 28, 2009

    Fantastic! good flow and nice imagery.

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 5, 2009

    This was so passionate and beautiful. Excellent imagery. You are so good at this! :)

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 20, 2009

    2nd look :P

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