A poem on my outlook at this moment.

Days rush into days

It’s the simple kind of craze

and as I watch and amaze

the shit piles start to raise

but it it doesn’t seem to phase

me much anymore, these silly ways

I just long for a simple red wine and a blaze

until then, days rush into days

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Comments (11)
  • DaYong on Feb 7, 2011

    beautiful.

  • Thespeakman on Feb 7, 2011

    That is nice Katarina

  • mitchey179 on Feb 7, 2011

    Yeah, I could use some alcohol and a blaze too LOL. Nice poem.

  • iklika on Feb 7, 2011

    nice

  • quiet voice on Feb 7, 2011

    Keep that strength. Take care.

  • Mike Davis on Feb 7, 2011

    Very nice

  • The Quail 1957 on Feb 7, 2011

    Awesome poem; keep the faith and the strenght.

  • Anupatil on Feb 8, 2011

    Nice and beautifully written.

  • hfj on Feb 8, 2011

    I sense a little boredom. Winter will do that to ya…and it keeps on piling…haha

  • addjust on Feb 10, 2011

    amazing

  • yes me on Feb 15, 2011

    Maw didn’t tell me this, cheers

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