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Deafening Silence of The Night Calls

jaysonv on Dec 14, 2009
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A poem about deafening silence of the night calls.

Deafening silence of the night falls,
Freezing every empty heart that calls,
Calls for the light that once was all,
Winter breaks as you walk from the door

Meadows once were green,
Blossoming flowers around were seen,
Lovebirds sang songs so sweet,
As the air so soft touched our feet.

Warmth like the sun,
Covets the entire land,
Burning yet satisfying,
Flames once we’re creating.

Then sudden coldness came,
Freezing wind reveals,
Night breaks and kills the flame,
Ending the day with the darkness of an evening.

Blood starts to race,
The heart is now misplace,
Shivering body freezes,
As you let go by pieces.

Deafening silence of the night falls,
Freezing every empty heart that calls,
Calls for the light that once was all,
Winter breaks as you walk from the door

- Roseller S. Fiel II

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  • Judy Kaelin on Dec 14, 2009

    I liked it, thanks

  • Unofre Pili on Dec 14, 2009

    “Deafening silence of the night fall,” is truly poetic line. Nice piece.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 14, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 14, 2009

    Beautiful poem…looking forward to springtime.

  • albert1jemi on Dec 14, 2009

    Wow that was great poem i was able to feel the situation.

  • ReggieLutz on Dec 14, 2009

    very nice

  • julianhw on Dec 14, 2009

    Well kept scansion – flowed nicely : )

  • AlmaG on Dec 14, 2009

    I love the poem and the title is very striking. Good job! :)

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Dec 14, 2009

    I agree with the others… the title, the words, the imagery. It’s beautifully written.

  • Will Dee on Dec 14, 2009

    Nicely written. I like the emotion in this piece.

  • Westbrook on Dec 14, 2009

    Actually, I like the cold of winter and night. Maybe it’s because I am in Michigan. Good poem.

  • divya983 on Dec 15, 2009

    Very beautiful………..

  • Annettenasser on Dec 15, 2009

    beautiful,,,

  • K.Reshma on Dec 15, 2009

    Lovely

  • jaysonv on Dec 15, 2009

    thanks guys..

  • ladydryle on Dec 15, 2009

    wow so nice…

  • jaysonv on Dec 15, 2009

    thanks ladydryle..

  • Teves on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice one…

  • jaysonv on Dec 16, 2009

    thanks teves..

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009

    Excellent. I like the play with words and the imagery. Very nice.

  • jaysonv on Dec 16, 2009

    Thanks PhoenixRox

  • PR Mace on Dec 16, 2009

    Nicely done.

  • Roseller S. Fiel, II on Dec 17, 2009

    thanks for being touched by this! i know the imagery and the words in this poem plays a vital role in making a scene in our mind.

    jayson thank you for posting my works….

  • jaysonv on Dec 18, 2009

    Thanks too Fiel.. :) ur such a great poet..

  • speckledlily on Dec 18, 2009

    Very nice poem, jayson!Talking about deafening silence….it makes me contemplate and achieve peace of mind momentarily.

    Thanks for sharing.

  • ken bultman on Dec 19, 2009

    Fantastic imagery. I could actually feel the cold when she opened the door.

  • ladydryle on Dec 20, 2009

    love it…

  • S A JOHNSON on Dec 20, 2009

    Very lovely.

  • jaysonv on Dec 20, 2009

    thanks Johnson..

  • George Mendoza on Dec 21, 2009

    nice poem.. i really like it. Thanks to you.

  • Grace Kathryn on Dec 21, 2009

    Well done. Night comes too soon in the winter, but at least I am one day closer to spring!

  • jaysonv on Dec 22, 2009

    Thanks for liking George and Ms. Grace.

  • jaysonv on Dec 26, 2009

    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!

  • jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009

    keep on publishing interesting articles guys! Thanks..

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