Dear Best Friends

Jenny Heart on Jan 29, 2011

Tags: best friend, creative writing, friend, friendship, heart, Poetry, promise land

Friends that can last until they meet once again in the promise land, is a forever one of a kind best friend. They’ll be there come rain or come shine, through the good times, and the bad. Now, that’s the type of friend you could count on.

What’s on your mind?

You look very kind

Got something to say

Before you go on your way

Your heart looks like its breaking

Maybe you feel forsaken

Your eyes turned from emerald green

To hazel nut gray

Has someone hurt you dear

Cause you look in deep fear

Of something or somebody

Come here, come here

Life is short my best friend

Please take my hand

And I promise to be your best friend

Until we both are upon the promise land

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Larry Fish on Jan 29, 2011
Good poem, enjoyable reading.
sloanie on Jan 29, 2011
You have a great feel for poetry.
CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 29, 2011
Thanks for your poem. Well done!
Judy Sheldon on Jan 29, 2011
Very pretty poem with lots of sincerity and compassion.
LoveDoctor on Jan 29, 2011
Beautiful poem. thanks for your comment.
Starpisces on Jan 29, 2011
left hand or right hand, you may take now, hahaha….
nice one, Jenny, hope I’m a friend to you….:)
PR Mace on Jan 30, 2011
A dear poem.
albert1jemi on Jan 30, 2011
nice
Kate Smedley on Jan 30, 2011
That’s so sweet, what true friendship is all about, lovely work again Jenny.
CA Johnson on Jan 30, 2011
What a great poem about friendship. It makes me think of how I feel about my friends.
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Feb 5, 2011
Very touching, it sure hit home for me.

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