A bright day I always remember as when we had a picnic together, sharing laughter till dusk…

My love, how I take great
delight in seeing your hair
billow in the cool breeze
and your face assume that
insatiable expression of
sublime beauty!

To this day, never have my
feelings changed since many
moons ago when I stood
transfixed by your angelic
face among the nondescript
crowd, like a radiant beam
from the constellation.

So let me take your hand,
hold you once again in a
gentle caress and enfold you
in my arms as when we kissed
in that blessed moment amid
the peal of church bells….

In desolation, hope flames in
me, my love, when the dazzling
ray of the future beckons, of
you and me forever locked
together in a passionate
embrace.

But it will soon get dark and
despairingly I must leave. The
grass covering the ground I’ve
cut and swept away along with
the withered leaves. Till my
return to replace them with
fresh ones, I hope, dear heart,
you love the flowers I lay
affectionately and with tears
on your tombstone.

Credit images owed to Johnny Dod’s article: http://writing.wikinut.com/Give-Me-A-poem-of-Requisite-and-Promise./11kyhimj/

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  • lovinglyoursjuny on Dec 10, 2011

    Excellent :p

    Next time search for your own photos….there’s a lot from the web (hehehe)

  • Rosettaartist1 on Dec 10, 2011

    nicely written

  • jayababy on Dec 10, 2011

    Romantic Buzzing….

  • Buzz J on Dec 10, 2011

    Thanks, Rosettaatist.

    Juny423, hmmp, eh tinatamad na ko, so what can you do you bout it..? lol Tsup!

  • Phoenix Montoya on Dec 30, 2011

    Naks naman, so romantic as always. Kaso lang tumaas balahibo ko sa pic, e nanggaling ba naman ke Johhny Dod pala. Forgive me, sometimes I can be a 13 year old lol …. Well done kabs!

  • papaleng on Dec 30, 2011

    Ang tindi ng lines mo. Napa-ibig ako..

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