At night, I have death dreams that come in the early morning hours and wake me…

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At night, i have death dreams that come in
the early morning hours and wake me,
and will not let me go back to sleep again.
Sometimes i drown, but never in the sea,
in lakes or ponds, jail cell toilets,
but never in the sea.
Burned alive on a ship at sea,
but never drowned in it.
Also burned alive at the stake in a bed,
falling into a burning pit, boiled in oil.
Steam explosions turn flesh to liquid,
nuclear war and death from radiation.
The death dreams are never the same,
in fact every one is different.
Sometimes the tortures use burning
coals, iron maidens or put bolts and
spikes through all parts of me or
molten lead in my ears or mouth.
But no matter what, when the pain
is unbearable and i must die,
instead i wake and don’t go back to sleep.
Car crashes are a quick awakening,
while suffocation from tuberculosis is slow,
ever so slow, those are the worst,
ones that the death comes ever so slowly.
Now i lay me down to weep,
i know the fear the dream will reap,
and when i die before i wake,
some day my soul the dream will take.

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  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 22, 2009

    Excellent! That was great poem. Nicely done and soo lovely. I loved it! Thanx for sharing Dave.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 22, 2009

    Hard dreams, there. I used to dream of running away.

  • mizterman on Mar 22, 2009

    Wow!!!!!
    That was an interesting poem. I would say, pray when you can’t go back to sleep.
    Wouldn’t want those dreams to creep
    Now if you die befor you wake, at least you had a chance to pray
    The reap will try and make a way but you’re soul he can’t take away. Good job

  • teddybear09 on Mar 22, 2009

    Oh my god. I thought I was the only one to have dreams like that. only in mine I fall from cliffs or some place high and see myself splatter all over the place when I hit bottom. But any how very nice piece, I like it.

  • nesita on Mar 22, 2009

    Thank you for sharing.

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Mar 22, 2009

    So mystical in its depth.

  • T C on Mar 22, 2009

    great job on this one!

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 23, 2009

    nicely written piece… keep it up!

  • Edward J Rodrigues on Mar 23, 2009

    i too get scary dreams like falling into a well full of scorpions and centipedes.

  • OhSugar on Mar 23, 2009

    Excellent expression of dreadful dreams. Good job

  • Likha on Mar 24, 2009

    They say death dreams symbolize deep-seated fears of separation or departure. I’ve had them and I’m glad I’m still around.

  • David SEO on Aug 22, 2009

    Jail cell toilets?

  • kate smedley on Apr 12, 2010

    Atmospheric and extremely well written poem. That is just how it is!

  • Jo Oliver on Apr 12, 2010

    Now i lay me down to weep,
    i know the fear the dream will reap,
    and when i die before i wake,
    some day my soul the dream will take.

    I always love the endings of your poems. Most powerful part.

  • Debra. on Apr 12, 2010

    This is my type of poetry! I love the dark depth of this one. The recurring dreams of death, a lurking foreboding sense. Awesome, Dave!!

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