Haiku -reflection.

No one wants to die
Not even that unique someone
You were long ago

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  • momofplenty on Jul 19, 2012

    wow, quite insightful.

  • Lynn Hollis on Jul 19, 2012

    This is true.

  • Jswana on Jul 19, 2012

    How true is this! so nice.

  • Kharla Jolly on Jul 19, 2012

    It’s scarey to think about, until it happens. Then we find out all the fear was unnecessary. Thanks, for a good haiku

  • jsimms32 on Jul 19, 2012

    Much more frightening the second read; I had a feeling I missed something the first time around. I was right! Very nice.

  • girishpuri on Jul 19, 2012

    true

  • Angelji on Jul 19, 2012

    I agree..

  • elee on Jul 19, 2012

    wonderful

  • AINIEE on Jul 20, 2012

    great one…..

  • drabiakhan on Jul 20, 2012

    Aww. nice ine Martin.

  • smokychristine on Jul 20, 2012

    There is a lot of truth here.

  • smokychristine on Jul 20, 2012

    Thanks for the poem.

  • Hrituporna Gogoi on Jul 20, 2012

    Touching, after all nothing lasts forever

  • sha4nny on Jul 20, 2012

    Nice!

  • Chris Bailie on Jul 20, 2012

    Intelligent piece of work, thank you.

  • iva75cpb on Jul 20, 2012

    I absolutely agree…

  • Marquis de Joker on Jul 20, 2012

    Kinda remids of being an innocent kid so long ago, in memory
    I Dont Wanna Die http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xlpPP1Sg74w

  • evcalangian on Jul 20, 2012

    It is an insightful haiku. Thanks for this.

  • lauralu on Jul 20, 2012

    Good work. ^_^

  • eaa1118 on Jul 20, 2012

    A 5-8-5 :-)

    Speak, Memory… :-)

  • eaa1118 on Jul 21, 2012

    P.S.

    You got me thinking there— with those last two lines…poignant double-entendre:-)

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