Today is my birthday.I’m 17 now.Anyone can pray for me because I am bad and can not pray for all my deeds I wish someone can pray for me to die and I can hug my death.

So many angels to bid farewell.

I pick up the value of my life

it’s not more than rusted lamp lying in corner.

To say goodbye to my life

I swallowed sleeping pills,

Indulged several bitter bones.

I planned to sacrifice my wrist vein

but nothing happened to me.

I was happy,when I was ill

but soon I recovered.

Trees wear new apparels in spring

and wash away their old sorrows as Autumn leaves,

I watch them with few dreams in eyes

when my funeral will take place?

when my fate will bring flowers on my grave?

when my soul will get freedom?

I can live in this empty house,

I’ll never say I’m tired of being alone,

I’m just burden on that residence

that’s why I want to taste the demise.

Mortality is beautiful,

To lie quietly under the ground

with grass on top and everything silent.

No yesterday,no tomorrow

to forget time and bag of hurting memories.

I’m sure their is more solitary

but I’m trained facing solitude as I’m alone here.

I played several parts to die but

death didn’t bother me as it hates me.

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  • Aroosa Hermosa on Apr 17, 2012

    Plzz don’t mind this poetry as it is my Birthday today but I feel this way :(

  • Ixodoi on Apr 17, 2012

    Happy birthday.
    I think you are the first poet to ever make death sounds so good. It just made me even more sad.

  • pulsananda on Apr 17, 2012

    Happy Birtday Aroosa?
    nice art.
    Are you still gloomy?

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Apr 17, 2012

    Happy Birthday!!!! I hope you start feeling happier sooner. I will include you as somebody to pray for.

  • momofplenty on Apr 17, 2012

    It is my sons birthday today too, I have never thought of Death in such a ‘light’. Cheers up.

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 17, 2012

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY FRIEND ENJOY THE DAY, MAKE THE MOST OF IT!!! You will feel better your thoughts are in my prayers

  • Angelji on Apr 17, 2012

    Sweetheart ..Happy happy birthday ! You are the most beautiful Lady in this world , so talented ,with lots of gems inside her heart.
    I am wishing you all the best for you deserve it..You are special in this world and you are loved.. You deserved all the best in this world. God bless you sweety..
    Don’t think of that death..for it is only for futile people and you are never that. I want you to smile today ..enjoy it ! My Hugs and Kisses … Just call me and i’ll come running…am always here for you..LOve you swetty !

  • shubhamkumar on Apr 17, 2012

    It really blowed my mind’……….
    on ocassion of this great day…………
    I have opened ur account at UBGB……….universal bank of god’s blessing and deposited 365 days of love,peace and happiness……enjoy withdrawing it……..

  • Thomas69 on Apr 17, 2012

    nice poem my friend, great

  • Safa on Apr 17, 2012

    Death will come to us all. But no matter what we do or hope for, we die when GOD decides its time.
    Meanwhile we have to be patient and pray for better days. Work hard to make our lives better. There is no time to waste.
    Great poem, dear

  • lauralu on Apr 17, 2012

    Dear Sweet Aroosa.
    if you have prayed and ask God to forgive you and all who have hurt you he will, life is worth living, you never know whats around the corner the secret is to be thankful, thank you, Jesus loves me thank you I can see thanks you I can believe His promises God can’t lie. You are forgiven and today is the first day of the rest of your life smile and realize that God has set you
    free. I love you and God loves you and your triond family is special, and they think you are special.
    love lauralu

  • Michael Degenhardt on Apr 17, 2012

    Happy Birthday and be very grateful that death would hate you for then it allows time for you to further learn how to love yourself. See remember that death and life, in retrospect, are the slaves to man, we command and so do you, but you don’t fully understand that yet I guess. Everything comes down to self and choice. I made a friend through poetry on the internet, to find out she was bi-polar. She chose not to take her meds and as a result she committed suicide. That was her choice, not death’s. Live in the knowing that we never truly know everything, but with time we can always learn more and hopefully accept more that much easier. Anyway, Happy Birthday to you and sorry for going on. ~ Michael

  • Christina Noll on Apr 17, 2012

    I’m fascinated by death and immortality… you can’t have the circle of life without it.. and I love Jesus and I will pray for you <3

  • Christina Noll on Apr 17, 2012

    love gothic artwork too!

  • Tulan on Apr 17, 2012

    Girl, I really wonder about you. Are you really in so much pain or do you only like this gloomy type of writing?

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 17, 2012

    If this is really you, I will keep you in my meditations. I cannot understand if you are in an abusive situation or what it is.

  • nurzaira on Apr 17, 2012

    Happy birthday dear..

    Your wish it was so gloomy..

    I hope you keep the spirit in this life sis, and may happiness always find you

  • Dora77 on Apr 18, 2012

    Aroosa,Belated Birthday Wishes to you.
    No sin is greater than God’s Forgiveness…Ask god to forgive all your sins and move forward just like a new born,Train your brain to love you and you don’t need anyone else to love you and make you feel better.Good lucks!

  • Martin Kloess on Apr 18, 2012

    Don’t miss today’s poem – forsaken

  • tonyleather on Apr 19, 2012

    Another great poem Aroosa

  • dwisuka on Apr 19, 2012

    great poem as usual. Happy birthday, dear…..

  • PrometheusPublish on Apr 19, 2012

    nice poem, keep it up

  • Dreamy777 on Apr 19, 2012

    Happy belated birthday

  • erwinkennythomas on Apr 19, 2012

    all the best! look on the bright side

  • vijayanths on Apr 19, 2012

    Happy birth day dear, belated wished.

    You are born to win. You will win and get what all you want. Just give some time…….

  • arizha on Apr 19, 2012

    happy birthday
    wish u all dream come true…

  • onestep234 on Apr 19, 2012

    nice pieces of you
    i feel beauty in your gloomy
    wish u all the best

  • cryptid on Apr 19, 2012

    Great poem, but I hope more fiction that biography.

  • juny423 on Apr 19, 2012

    Happy Birthday

    Life is beautiful as you are :)

  • Rahmat Syam on Apr 19, 2012

    Nice poetry here :D
    Life is a blessing. So, use the remaining life to make yourself better. :)

  • travelnews on Apr 20, 2012

    I think you are the first poet to ever make death sounds so good. It just made me even more sad.

  • Hakarus on Apr 20, 2012

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY SIS :)
    Hye plzz be merry like this :)

  • Amigo on Apr 20, 2012

    Happy BIRTHDAY.Plzz :)

  • gembox02 on Apr 20, 2012

    nice

  • TIPS2TRICKS on Apr 20, 2012

    its great!!

    sorry, i’m late,, happy B-day friend, :D

  • sheilanewton on Apr 20, 2012

    Death had better keep hating you for a lot longer, Aroosa. We need you in this world, girl. Oh, we do – we really do. Be positive, honey. Time always heals – ALWAYS. beleive me.

  • Linvio on Apr 20, 2012

    It would be best if you visit homes of the less fortunate people or the very sick and poor people. By seeing them, you might realize you are such a blessed and lucky person. Whatever challenges that you are going through, you will get over it. Just NEVER lose the strength to fight. Continue doing what you love doing (for example writing) so that you will experience happiness….

  • ilikep2s on Apr 21, 2012

    great poem

  • BlackMadonnaPress on Apr 21, 2012

    Pretty dark piece sister. Some cool stuff going on in the poem. Did you ever check out Sylvia Plath’s work?

  • realityspeaks on Apr 21, 2012

    Belated Birthday Wishes Aroosa. Do what you love, love what you do, the rest will take care of itself.

  • wShadow on Apr 22, 2012

    Happy birthday, and remember: the biggest darkness always come seconds before the sun starts to rise.

  • girishpuri on Apr 25, 2012

    Belated Happy birthday Aroosa, I was outstation, We love you all, GOD bless you.
    Girish

  • conundrum on Apr 30, 2012

    Belated Natal Day to you! Just bailed out from my pc repair job! I couldn’t say happy because the poetry conveyed otherwise! I understand you feeling that way! All of us, once in our life tried to return to our creator the life he lends to us but that’s normal! Who said life is fair? I tried it once but I didn’t succeed (obviously) but I realized that life is a journey, it’s a battle that I have to win because if I fail at least I know I fought a good fight! just try to hold on and figure out things! You may find an answer to that! You have a family here at Triond just remember that! May “GOD” clears your mind! GOD BLESS YOU! If you need somebody we are here to support you!

  • misterdd on May 5, 2012

    Happy birthday Aroosa. I wish you all best. You must be more happy. You know why? Good and God wish you here with all good people. Do not be sad because of bad people, be happy for good people. Do not worry for all bad because it is on you to do good things, and then you and all people will be happy. Be happy and enjoy

  • JoniJones on May 13, 2012

    great writing

  • ryan75 on May 14, 2012

    wow…
    it touch my heart

  • AINIEE on May 15, 2012

    i’m extremely sorry. i’ve forgotten your birthday………..
    my lovely sis………..
    i’m really sorry
    :-(

  • Sincere504 on Jun 1, 2012

    I love this you captured some of my feelings of the pain of life and the silent happiness of death.. i look forward to this new friendship of ours…..

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 1, 2012

    Thankx everybody

  • blanka on Jun 5, 2012

    Ok. this is dark.

    ‘Happy’ Birthday, I guess.

  • Esmé.Dia on Jun 6, 2012

    wonderful set of words wrapping perfect thoughts,,
    simply mind blowing

  • Pinoydreamer on Jun 21, 2012

    we can try make some tunes for this you have the lines

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