About a love letter.

Debit and Credit

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

I wrote her a love letter, 

She never seem to reply, 

It goes to the debit….

And yet, I know she read it, 

I will keep that in the credit….

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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  • Ramalingam on Nov 25, 2009

    Is it single entry or double entry book keeping ?

  • svishnugopal on Nov 25, 2009

    very nice…lol…

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 25, 2009

    Cute! ^_^

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Nov 25, 2009

    not what I was expecting, very uplifting.

  • cebuanaeyez on Nov 25, 2009

    very witty of you!

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 25, 2009

    you sure know accounting, lol

  • diamondpoet on Nov 25, 2009

    Interesting, I liked the picture, but this one didn’t wow me like all your other works. But it was good.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 25, 2009

    that’s cute, well done.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 25, 2009

    A very nice poem, well done.

  • AlmaG on Nov 25, 2009

    Great one!

  • CA Johnson on Nov 25, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Sunitha Stalin on Nov 25, 2009

    Dr and accounting, good one

  • vb545323 on Nov 25, 2009

    Nice!

  • Teves on Nov 26, 2009

    Nice photo…

  • Patrick Regoniel on Nov 26, 2009

    Short but full of meaning. Nice!

  • Hansika on Nov 26, 2009

    great share….

  • aunslaught on Nov 26, 2009

    short and nice.. well done, bro

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 26, 2009

    Very nice to read..

  • Moses Ingram on Nov 26, 2009

    Cute

  • Netty net on Nov 27, 2009

    witty thanks for the laugh.

  • Lisa Clayton Williams on Nov 27, 2009

    Love this! Short and full of wit! Perfect! :-)

  • V rank on Nov 29, 2009

    aha… i was blind-sighted again… :D

  • joanne721 on Dec 9, 2009

    NICE :) i think you should off-set it .. hahaha

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