Debris

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Jan 20, 2011

Tags: 1000, arrow, as tall as lions, conscious streaming, crooked, game, heart, love, roll of the dice

17

Just some poetic conscious streaming.

like they say

in some strange way

its not like you went away

its more like you never existed

like the crooked talk

you would speak to me

wasnt truly twisted

as if the arrow that pierced my heart

had in reality narrowly missed it

like the heat of a 1000 fires

had never burned

as if the laws of love and of life

I had never knowingly learned

its like some strange game

that although lame I still voluntarily played

I rolled the dice

I played really really nice

I gambled and I lost

and now its your turn

Copyright ©2011 by j. k. Bradford, All Rights Reserved

8
Liked it

Comments (17)

Sexyhood03 on Jan 20, 2011
nice poem
webseowriters on Jan 20, 2011
Interesting
LadyElena on Jan 20, 2011
Interesting Poem.
sloanie on Jan 20, 2011
Love and life?
GameLive on Jan 20, 2011
nice 1
LCM Linda on Jan 20, 2011
Interesting poem. Powerful and precise expression of love and life.
Butterfly Musings on Jan 20, 2011
very nice
Judy Sheldon on Jan 21, 2011
Romantic! Place this one in a valentine\’s day card and give it to your sweetest.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Jan 21, 2011
I always laugh when someone calls a poem I write “interesting” such a polite way of saying “i dont like it”!

hehehehehe!
CHIPMUNK on Jan 21, 2011
great share
Kate Smedley on Jan 21, 2011
‘I gambled and I lost/and now it’s your turn’ – I love that, it says so much in so few words.
Kate Smedley on Jan 21, 2011
‘I gambled and I lost and now it’s your turn’ – I love that, it says so much in so few words.
gaby7 on Jan 21, 2011
A moving poem!
lillyrose on Jan 21, 2011
the games of life
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Jan 22, 2011
Many thanks everyone
Raene Kaleinani on Jan 22, 2011
“like the heat of a 1000 fires” & “the laws of love and life” … I like these phrases in your poem.
Raene Kaleinani on Jan 22, 2011
“like the heat of a 1000 fires” & “the laws of love and life” … I like these phrases in your poem.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading

Categories