Decieve or Relieve

katarina giselle on Jan 11, 2011

Poem..written old-style katarina.

See you loose

and you’ll bruise and you’ll bruise

it’s the bruise that you rused

it’s the pain multiplied

the infection inside

slowly spreads til your head

hits the floor, there you are dead

thats not true, you are there

barely there

barely share

the truth; its the ruthless

insanity staying here; stakingly

waking me waking me

stop! think about it

keep thinking keep thinking

you’re sure that you’re real that your

here that your lies are at bay

stay away stay away

you’ve nothing

not nothing

no nothing

more for me to say

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Comments (9)

learnandearn on Jan 11, 2011
sweet
The Quail 1957 on Jan 11, 2011
Great poem! Often we can express our most hidden emotions through the words of our poems.
akalinik on Jan 11, 2011
i like it
Sourav on Jan 11, 2011
Nice write.
Hendrik on Jan 11, 2011
Good, laden with emotion!
Prometheus Ridley Scott on Jan 11, 2011
Good piece. Emotions are sometimes best shared to another through the written word.
deedaG50 on Jan 11, 2011
Good job. Releasing that creative adrenalin.
Black Kush on Jan 11, 2011
Pain is Love. You have talent!
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