Decline and Revival

Aiswarya T Anish on Nov 9, 2010

Tags: at some point of oout lives....., We all are saved from the clutches of hatred and shown the way to a true life

We all are saved from the clutches of hatred and shown the way to a true life, at some point of oout lives…..

Black eyes penetrate into mine,

Tugging it far away from the shine

Narrowing its blue lashes, the dark gem within

Sparkle in a million rays as it falls on my skin

The outskirts of my mind lies,

Stretched off, ahead in such infinite lines

Blinding every premise with its boundless room

And its freight of merry, mourns and rigid gloom

There, it lies and reflects in shapeless form

Like the aftermath of a spirited storm

What shall I do, to free my soul,

From the hands of this pitch black hole?

Around me clutches those auburn hands

In these uneven, lonely lands

That makes me homeless, soulless

Those which turns to me merciless

Why, why do I have to be,

Yet another voodoo doll to see?

Why should it always be me,

Rocking in rhythm to your mind’s decree?

As you drag me over towards

As you tame and leash my heart

As you master your enchanting art

I see light from the sky impart

My soul leaks in joyous calm

Not any more fraught in your wicked palm

Then, the hour of renaissance begins

Erasing the burns of your profane sins

The hole of hatred goes strongly sealed

And the span of my past stiffly concealed

And my heart stands still to be refilled

With love, mercy and purity, fulfilled.

24th September 2010

10: 15 am

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Comments (28)

Angela Ohm on Nov 9, 2010
This is wonderful ! You are very gifted ! Thank you for sharing !

Peace and Blessings
Angela
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 10, 2010
This is very good.

Nice pace and layered meaning.
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 10, 2010
Keep it up.
CVSivaprakashan on Nov 10, 2010
Refreshing!
crisdiwata on Nov 10, 2010
very deep
Suni51 on Nov 10, 2010
I have a belief,
Do not, all you can,
Spend not all you have,
Believe not all you hear.
You will not regret,
Any thing for ever.
Eunice Tan on Nov 10, 2010
Well written.
Eunice Tan on Nov 10, 2010
Well written.
clandestinef on Nov 10, 2010
Good work. I love reading this one. Thanks for sharing!
Snooky on Nov 10, 2010
This is deep daring and oh so darling
You have my applause on this one
albert1jemi on Nov 10, 2010
well written
PSingh1990 on Nov 10, 2010
Nice Share.
Godwill A. Paul on Nov 12, 2010
Great work.
Rajesh Sheth on Nov 14, 2010
Do you believe on your self?
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Let the world follow you,
Be the leader
And feel the inner.
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Don’t let the strings of confidence be loosen,
Survive from the cuts of the evil,
And feel the inner.
Rajesh Sheth on Nov 14, 2010
Do you believe on your self?
.
.
.
.
.
.
Let the world follow you,
Be the leader
And feel the inner.
.
.
.
.
.
Don\’t let the strings of confidence be loosen,
Survive from the cuts of the evil,
And feel the inner.
Spiritt on Nov 26, 2010
You have such an ability to make words more beautiful than they originally are. It is as if I can see your soul inside each verse. Very very good.
Bo Russo on Nov 26, 2010
I have heard about you, young lady, and that was very, very good in my opinion. Cheers
Rhodora Bande on Nov 26, 2010
This is effortlessly beautiful.
Raene Kaleinani on Dec 2, 2010
You have a lovely writing style.
T D Hadnot on Dec 10, 2010
Nice!!!
SimplyShash on Dec 12, 2010
Wonderful wordings.
LiteraryPrincess on Dec 19, 2010
Very good share!
butuhuang86 on Dec 19, 2010
Is this a poem?
very nice ….

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DR.VNS on Jan 5, 2011
Congratulations
gaby7 on Jan 14, 2011
You are a prolific poet Anish-this one is simply mind blowing!
shamsu on Jan 19, 2011
No words, dear girl aishu. Yes you have a style, your own style. Maths of words, and adds up it all so nicely. Keep writing.
David Roy on Feb 8, 2011
great share
yes me on Feb 21, 2011
I liked this one cheers

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