Finding a love so good and true, and someone that accepts everything about you. This is so rare these days. If you find it, hang on to it and dedicate everything you are and know to making it last a lifetime.

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My goal is to love you,

and I will show you

that my love is true.

Thank you for the feelings that I feel.

I haven’t felt feelings this real

in a very long time.

It took someone special

to drag me out of my shell.

You rescued me

from a nightmarish hell.

You have accepted me

for who I am,

and didn’t give a damn

about my past.

I was your only focus,

wanting our love

to have the chance to last.

I feel magnetized to you

by such an electrical force,

and you are the source

from which I draw my strength

and all of the things I need.

Upon your positive energies I feed,

which is the sustenance needed to live.

For all of the sacrifices

that you have made,

the only thing

that I have to give,

is just me.

You are treasured

more than you know,

and I promise

to never let you go.

No matter what happens,

I am here for you.

Dedicated to do

what is within my power,

hoping you will know

how I feel about you.

I get so emotional

just thinking of

your precious heart.

I knew you were special

from the very start.

Your eyes told all,

bouncing around, and up and down

fixated on the wall.

So shy you were,

and I knew for sure

what was about to occur.

It was settled then and there

that we would make

an awesome pair.

To love and to share.

A love so very rare.

If I were to find myself without you,

it would be unfathomable.

It would be my worst nightmare.

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  • jimbob1 on Jan 16, 2010

    DB – Hope you never experience that nightmare…This is a beautiful pledge of dedication and heart-felt love. A magnificent love poem written by a very talented wordsmith, undoubtedly dedicated to a very fortunate individual. I love it. Thanks. Looking forward to reading many more examples of your magnificence.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 16, 2010

    This kissing pair
    I admire most
    I love them
    For they love
    Each other,
    Apart from their kiss
    I do them miss.

    I hit the nails
    On their heads
    If you want
    A head to nail
    Call me over
    Before
    I’m dead

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 16, 2010

    Dedication to your love is sometimes a difficult thing to maintain. There are temptations aplenty in this world. Your devotion shines. You’re a rare individual.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 16, 2010

    Nice piece…LOVELY !!!

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