A walk in the woods in winter finds evidence of long-ago inhabitance.

Silence.

A spell of misdirection

broken softly by

the questions of an owl.

Trees are quiet sentinels

dressed in shades of monochrome

beneath a lunar lamp,

ranked in accidental fashion

out to margins of perception,

gnarled arms stretched wide

to gather gleaming shawls,

spun of random falling flakes.

 

Ruts of antique wheels,

faint depressions in new snow,

run straight across this clearing,

then they curve away to gone

into the deeper forest land.

Lowly posts of gray do stand

bereft of fallen fence rails,

wearing stovepipe hats of white.

Wild January winds will never

pass  the standing sentries,

or break this gentle glamour.

Silence.

Casey Mack (2005)

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  • stryka66 on Nov 23, 2009

    Nice word images -

  • Linda Lori on Nov 23, 2009

    Your words animate! Well done!

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 23, 2009

    Wonderful poem ^_^

  • papaleng on Nov 23, 2009

    great imagery and fluid flow.

  • coffeeadict on Nov 23, 2009

    Brilliant poem. I like the atmosphere described.

  • Katie Marie on Nov 23, 2009

    “gather gleaming shawls,

    spun of random falling flakes”

    Just loved these lines and the beginning and ending with the word silence, which is so much a part of the white winter world.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 24, 2009

    Very Well Done…..

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Nov 24, 2009

    “Trees are quiet sentinels, dressed in shades of monochrome beneath a lunar lamp”…I just love your ability to make your pen a paintbrush. Truly beautiful, Casey.

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