Defenseless Against You…(The mind of a woman)

Defenseless Current mood:indescribable

 ”When I stand before you… I am paralyzed in your presence

I am unable to think, or reason

every inch of me is at your submission

 under your control

 I cannot deny you anything

 nor do I want too

 I am your equal yet your subordinate in love…

I am too strong a girl to feel so dominated

 but your power over me is too strong I love you

I am defenseless against you or the power that you have over me

maybe that’s the way it is supposed to be in nature…

We are both Alphas…

 I am strong in the world… to everyone else…

 But You…. I need you

 Crave you

Excited by your look, your touch

 So damn electrifying, it shudders me to the very core of who I am as a woman

 I feel like a total woman in your presence….

 I never want to leave this place..that…

I have found under your magic..your power…

 Over me!”

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  • Cyni1106 on Jun 18, 2011

    Wow, you have a way with words. Interesting. :)

  • waflay on Jul 29, 2011

    Like a touch in the eye,
    Like a whisper of love,
    Your poem has struck my heart,
    I like it,
    I love its content,
    I hope to see you more
    I will be here to learn from you,

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