Do writings take on a life of their own? If they do, are they aware of having been created?

A poem. I am a thing apart
from my creation as a thought.
I have no need for more attention
From The Poet who claims Creation.
He no longer matters much to me,
I turn away from Him, and forbid
His further changes to my form.

(Within this pretty little verse
there hides a fellow with a curse
that makes him very, very terse)

Stop that! Stop it now, I say!
I need no one to touch my life
or change my lines again.
My dignity and freedom are
established , Your power to project
Your will into my Self is myth,
no longer relevant to me.

(A sky of blue I give to you,
a canvas for the things you do
to show the world your heart so true)

NO! No, no, NO!
Not now, at this late date,
you cannot redirect my fate
or help the others to relate…
Argh! No! I-Will-Not-Follow
the leads you bait me with,
or dance to rhymes and rhythms
to perform upon command.

(A hint of breeze in feathered hair
accentuates this day so fair,
and leaves a feeling, oh so rare)

Stop! No more!
You shall not guide my way
with soft clichés and silly images.
You are only legend from
the shadows of my birthing Words,
I walk free of all authority,
my path is mine to choose.

(And when the day was slow to end
we traveled up around that bend
and found a message there, to send)

Enough! I say. I’ll stand no more!
I will wear no sequined syllables
or costume-cute poetic form devices.
My final form and end are mine
to prearrange, and when I have
decided, then

(And so the moral is, you see,
that many things may come to be
but when you stop, is up to Me)

Casey Mack (2005) 

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  • BullwinkleMuse on Mar 9, 2010

    Poetry is a lot like giving birth, isn’t it? After a certain point, you have to just let them go, to become…whatever. I think they grow and mature in the reading, from one to another. Still, I often meddle in their lives, tweaking here and there.
    I really like this poem, Casey, and would love to see more from you in this style. The only thing I might change is to replace the full stop after “poem” in the first line, with a comma after “am”.
    Really nice work.

  • stryka66 on Mar 10, 2010

    Great piece, Casey – enjoyed reading very much

  • stryka66 on Mar 10, 2010

    Great piece, Casey – enjoyed reading very much.

  • swatilohani on Mar 10, 2010

    excellent share

  • Katie Marie on Mar 10, 2010

    I’m laughing out loud. So much so that it didn’t seem right to limit it to a simple lol. I absolutely loved this! The personification of the poem itself. You pulled it off excellently (sorry poem, but you really do have to give him credit).

  • walizz on Mar 10, 2010

    i like ths poem!

  • papaleng on Mar 10, 2010

    Outstanding write. I do enjoy reading this one.

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 10, 2010

    ‘I will wear no sequinned syllables’ – that is just inspired, outstanding work as always Casey and extremely clever.

  • Alice Sanders on Mar 10, 2010

    Wow, Casey..an excellent piece of work….I must say that I enjoyed this poem as it made me read between the lines at times.

    I feel so privileged, enlightened and uplifted to read this fine poetry…keep on writing and please continue to share.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Mar 12, 2010

    What a great poem, Casey–so clever! Really enjoyed the read. :)

  • Cinderella Can Dream on Mar 24, 2010

    It was a wonderful poem! Your words express similar thoughts I go through.Cinderella Can Dream

  • Katie Marie on Jun 11, 2011

    Just ’stumbled’ across this. Just as good as it was the first time around.

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