Deja’vu

yes me on Oct 21, 2011

A wee run through the puddles of ones life.

Could be happy with this Deja’vu

Looking all around me a dull grey sky

Weeps as it has for the last 40 days

Or is it 44 so wet it laps from door to door

From shore to shore no more I hear old

Noah cry in vain still it

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Pours, and pours of rain:

………….

Memories flood back

To the boy I once was full of life

Never knew? thin ice

Until love came calling

Still it was nice

Making and breaking

Some very thin ice

Each crack of it breaking

Say’s a deja’vu

Pardon me,.. but do I know you?

Or tell my sweet heart is this Deja’vu?

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Comments (16)

Tiki33 on Oct 21, 2011
Very poetic. I love the pictures in this article. Thanks for sharing such talents.
sheilanewton on Oct 21, 2011
Fabulous. Absolutely gripping. I love the penultimate line ‘do I know you?’ How clever you are, Krupali, my friend.
VoIP on Oct 21, 2011
Very nice.
Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 21, 2011
A good one wee man.
Atanacio on Oct 21, 2011
Love your wee runs cant stop saying that
SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 21, 2011
Made me smile.
Karen Gross on Oct 21, 2011
I love the happy rhythm of this poem. I remember puddle jumping and jumping on thin ice when I was a kid. Fell through and got soaked sometimes. Great memories!
Aalkaline on Oct 21, 2011
Mood making piece.
mdrkarim7 on Oct 22, 2011
Good reading.
tonywriter on Oct 22, 2011
very nice and interesting writing
dwisuka on Oct 22, 2011
I like the pictures
Ruby Hawk on Oct 22, 2011
You\’re on a roll, Matt. Is that little puddle jumper your granddaughter? She\’s a cutie.
Tulan on Oct 22, 2011
Liked the poem and the little girl is darling.
Gerard Galvestini on Oct 22, 2011
Yep. We all suffer from some form of deja vu at some point. Nice poem. Loved the pictures as well.
ittech on Oct 25, 2011
nice poem nice pictures as well
FX777222999 on Oct 28, 2011
good poem

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