Demand’s of a Kiss

cardy on Mar 30, 2010

A poem of a lovers kiss…

To watch you’re eyes sparkle and dance,

it fills my heart with a lovers fleeting glance.

To watch you’re lips twitch into a transparent smile,

I know in an instant what you have been thinking all the while.

Moving close to confirm my thoughts you clam my lips,

my toes curl my fingers tingle at the tips.

A kiss from you is all it takes,

as my body shatters and brakes.

My thoughts are urgent as you’re kiss takes hold,

you’re thoughts are vibrant loud and bold.

My body is in you’re hands,

as I give in to you’re demands……………….

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Comments (10)

Jay Knights on Mar 30, 2010
A kiss can be so passionate, so enlightening, so opening….give in fully and enjoy every moment….
Shamyl on Mar 30, 2010
Stirring poetry…igniting the passions inside.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 30, 2010
You express your feelings so well in this piece. Well done.

Christine
lillyrose on Mar 30, 2010
beautifully written Cardy! very romantic
Hepsi.M on Mar 30, 2010
very intimate and beautiful expression.
Ruby Hawk on Mar 30, 2010
Young love is wonderful.
LOVELYHONEY on Mar 30, 2010
It’s a kiss of fire
Which burns?
My whole body entire,
Soul, self and desire
Lock stock and barrel
Where’s lies the satire?
What a kiss that you place
On ones lips
It misses
My lips
My lips
My lips

Gr8888 kiss
You give
giftarist on Mar 30, 2010
Well expressed one. Like it!
Lord Banks on Mar 31, 2010
Great work, the first kiss can be magical and all the outside world fades away. Good stuff, LB
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 15, 2010
thanks and nice toooooooo

its nice to read u

and thanks for all ur encouraging comments

but for ur good sentiments

my work would be nought

Hi there!