Demon Drink

Alistair Briggs on Jan 11, 2009

About how alcohol makes you feel and how it affects you.

Alcohol affects your brain,
makes you dream weird dreams.
Some are really surreal,
some just feel real.

Alcohol affects your brain,
especially when you dream
of being sober
and don’t like how it feels.

Alcohol affects your brain,
makes your dreams come real.
When they become nightmares,
the reality is not very good.

Alcohol affects your brain,
makes you dream weird dreams.
Dreams and nightmares intertwined,
makes you drink during the day.

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cardy on Jan 12, 2009
makes you think.
writingares on Jan 12, 2009
UMMM nice poem now i know how it feels like to be drunk =)
Mrs. Turaz on Apr 27, 2009
Alcohol is almost similar with drinking poison. Many people had died after got drunk.
maeraquel on Apr 1, 2010
I have nothing against alcohol. In fact I drink red wine every night or so. I read in one article that red wine keeps the fat away.
jadeflowerjan on Apr 14, 2011
the thought is nice but the manner in which it was written should be more convincing. you are definitely correct on alcohol, my friend!

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