Ready to embrace the dark side of your world.

 

You are a demon of the night,

the wicked prince of darkness.

You dress entirely in black,

you possess a sinful nature.

Now I walk along beside you,

our connection can’t be broken.

You fill my nights with pleasure,

it is you that I will forever love.

I am now ready to embrace,

the dark side of your world.

Place an immortal kiss on my neck,

I can no longer resist the temptation.

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  • Theresa Johnson on Aug 26, 2009

    nice work darla… i love vampires

  • Nikita K on Aug 26, 2009

    There is something very gothic and dark about this deep passion that you’ve so beautifully described! I love the dark imagery you use, Darla, like “prince of darkness” and “immortal kiss” feel so packed with emotion but equally sinister.

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Aug 26, 2009

    Darla, you’re a wicked, wicked girl…….I love it !

  • Emma Green on Aug 26, 2009

    Great poem, such a good use of dark imagery here.

  • Michael Degenhardt on Aug 26, 2009

    Sounds like vampire love or something from True Blood. Very good flow and perfect tone for this write, I enjoyed this. Michael

  • alc on Aug 26, 2009

    Another great poem Darla! Thanks for the share!

  • Milton H Peebles III on Aug 26, 2009

    Good one.
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • ken bultman on Aug 26, 2009

    Pull the shades. I need more dark in here.

  • Tanya Wallace on Aug 26, 2009

    Very dark,deep poem with some wonderful imagery!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 27, 2009

    wow Darla, a great read…. I LOVE IT!! :D

  • David Crerand on Aug 27, 2009

    Beautiful surrender. Well done.

  • orlandoJP on Aug 28, 2009

    good poem

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