Departure, a Limerick

Adam Henry Sears on Aug 6, 2009

Tags: Archer, crazy, leaving, Limerick, poem, Poetry, point of departure

Ever had to leave? Really fast? I mean: faster than a speeding …?

I was leaving a girlfriend named Emily
when she sent me a telefacsimile:
“At your point of departure,
I’m sending an archer
for calling me crazy in simile.”

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maranatha on Aug 6, 2009
You like to live dangerously, do you then?
Katie Marie on Aug 6, 2009
Very good, Adam. Got to watch those similes.
payge on Aug 6, 2009
Very nice limerick….yes…you never know whats behind a smile.One can never tell whats behind them or how dangerous.
Jenny Heart on Aug 6, 2009
I agree with payge.
Inna Tysoe on Aug 7, 2009
I third(?) payge.

Inna
Adam Henry Sears on Aug 7, 2009
Thanks guys!

To payge, Mrs.Heart, and Inna … I kept wondering what you meant by “behind a smile”, until I realized that’s probably what you thought I wrote. The word is not smile, it’s simile — a comparison using like or as.
CutestPrincess on Aug 14, 2009
well done again, keep u the excellent writing…
S A JOHNSON on Dec 6, 2009
Interestingly good. ^_^

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